To "Bedtime Story"
_//Animation
I liked the animation at the loading screen, it was good. Then you followed with a really bad smoke effect in my opinion (I think it was smoke) but the way the weather changes is nicely done. But if you use something like a magic spell, and use the same movieclip or graphic over and over again, try to make the effect better than some skewing and alpha tweening. That would show more effort and more potential. Then the action begins, awesome! I really liked it, the effects and emotions gave the wizards some character, and your background is also very good, just like your muffin submission. Your earth explosion also was really good, and the result of it was well done, I loved the crater. And the ending photo was a nice touch, I predicted that the other wizard would rise out of his crater. It's good that you closed the animation with friendship, this is your best submission, I bet!
_//Sound
There wasn't much sound, you could've added a dramatic song when the wizards were fighting to make it much more interesting and entertaining, but this was also pretty good. And you didn't have a lack of sound effects, which made everything even better, great job!
_//Story
I must say that the story isn't too original, it's like a little brother versus sister fight if you know what I mean. But! I also must admit that you have done a great job with this kind of story, and everything just flowed through really well, great emotions. Especially those text balloons with animations was impressive, I think if I had done this I wouldn't animate the balloons simply because I'm lazy like that :-)
_//Overall vote and rating
Vote: 5
Rating: 9